Position Essay

Branson Monico

8/8/11

Pd. 2

My position Essay

            My personal opinion on this article would be that it’s the peoples fault because there the ones not paying attention to anything that could look dangerous and to their surroundings. Such as when an incident happened in 2006 when a couple from California walked off a steep cliff near Opaekaa Falls in Kauai, but there was no trail in that area which it would be their fault because they weren’t following the right path to the sites. Also it could be the governments fault too because they didn’t but any warning signs that’s saying danger around this area, but it’s the peoples decision to listen. There are many deaths cause by bad decisions or accidents or just the why of life because you could be from a different place and not know the risk your taking by doing these things. Just like when a man turned his back against a wave and he got knocked over a cliff getting swept 100 yards offshore when he died. If people could be more careful and watch whats going on then these deaths wouldn’t happen. So I conclude that if there is signs warning you, you should obey them and follow the rules, but if there isn’t any people should make the right decision so they wont get hurt.